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Why won't you let me love you?
Why won't you let me care for you?

What have I done to deserve this cruel fate?
To be torn between heart and mind...
Knowing you are happy
  without me.
Seeing you enjoy life
  without me.
But my heart still yearns for you
  can't stop loving you

Where did I leave your heart? Where did I lose your love?
The questions so many, the answers so few...

Why won't you let me love you?
It's all I need
  all I need to live
  all I need to be happy
All I have lost...

Time will ease the pain they say
  time will heal the wounds they say
Then why does the pain only get worse
  worse the longer you are gone?

Why can't you just let me love you?
Why can't you just love me?
It's all I ever asked,
  all I ever wanted...
I always need to write to get something of my chest and well...
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MoonlitChimera Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2007
This is really a touching poem. :petting: Perhaps you should try to write more about your feelings, it sometimes really helps to clear things of the mind... (and in your case it produces some good work as well ;-) )
I is a strange thing really, that it is so much easier to write about sad things than about good things. Perhaps because the good things aren't needed to be written down. I guess you don't want to read them, you just want to feel them.
Anyway, you know I'm there, right? :hug: :hug:
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LordWhiteRabbit Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah. I think I was (am ?) feeling the same things for somebody else (I hope ^^).

Yeah I love this poem because it's really what I'm feeling.
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MareLooke Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2006
Thanks, it's always a consolation that there are other people going through the same thing as you do and I hope it at least made you feel a little better... :)
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pebcak Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2006
:hug:
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MareLooke Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2006
Good thing there are still friends :hug:
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pebcak Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2006
Yeah, sometimes it's good to know they are there.
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